17A Elevator Pitch No. 2


What stood out to me the most was the comment that I didn't differentiate my company from others. This was also the most surprising and was the most helpful for the pitch. I didn't feel like anything was wrong or silly in my feedback.

Based on the feedback I tried putting more pep in my pitch and show more enthusiasm. I also tried to differentiate my company more in this pitch 

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  1. UnknownMarch 18, 2018 at 10:28 AM

    Fantastic pitch, I absolutely loved it. You made it real, you were fluent, you knew your facts, and the location could not have been any more perfect for the pitch. I would post that as a commercial on TV as is. It was genuine, non scripted, and felt real. Really great job Chaton.

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  2. UnknownMarch 18, 2018 at 2:24 PM

    I loved your pitch! I liked how you gave a couple relevant examples, the environment that your pitch took place in, and how you even added in a slogan at the end. Your pitch was very professional and creative. I still support your idea and I think it would be successful in the industry.

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  3. UnknownMarch 18, 2018 at 10:30 PM

    Hey Chaton,
    Great pitch, I liked the fact that you brought in some statistics in your pitch. I liked the background you chose and most important how in the beginning you moved from the tractor and started talking. The content covered everything that one needs to know about the product you are offering. Great job

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